Tuesday 27 September 2011

REVIEW WRITING #2

MY SISTERS PERFORMANCE


The time was 5:30 and we hopped off Manurewa East School playground and ran towards the hall ready to take our seats. The hall was packed with multi-cultural families and friends. The performances had everyone excited and proud of their children/friends/relatives. I thought it was a great idea to create a cultural performance especially during the world cup.

I made sure that I took a lot of photos of my sister and the samoan group as they did Samoan Traditional Dances. They were ready to perform at Manurewa Intermediate. Overall I enjoyed it and thought it was a great opportunity to show how multi-cultural, hard working and creative the school is.

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3 comments:

  1. How cute!

    p.s. you spelt opportunity incorrectly, see if you can go back and edit it :)

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  2. Good stuff. You'll have to point out which one is your sister to me :)

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